Mika the Fox

[Panda]

Name: Mika
The winged fox

Gander: Male
Age: 17
Height: 5’6”
Weight:
Hair: Black and red (Both)
Eye: Red (both)
Skin: White
Markings: a starange shaped sign on his lower chest in human form


Race: Winged fox with a human form (Only hold human form for 5 post thats why he avoids Suko she does not know)
Class: still learning
Alignment: Neutral
Hometown: unknown he was found by a small village and taken care of untill his true form started to show
Position: Student
Family: dead, Teacher Suko (he avoids her)

Weapons: Claws and teeth

Train Skills: Flying

Strengths:
- Above average speed
- Air attacks

Weaknesses:
- all magic
- blunt attacks
- Range attacks
- Sword attacks
- blows to the chest

[Silk]

Yay! W00t! Internet is back on, and so is Silk!

Now, time to review.

"Winged fox with a human form (Only hold human form for 5 post thats why he avoids Suko she does not know) "

So, if he can only hold the human form for 5 posts, is there any recharge time to when he can change back? Say if you just changed back to wolf, how long would you have to wait 'till you could change back? Instantly? 5,7, or 1000 posts?

"Train Skills: Flying

Flying is not a trained skill .. it would be a Strength as he was born with it

Strengths:
- Above average speed
- Air attacks"

So, he can fly. Ok. What about people that are purely swordsmen/women? They can't hit you, because your flying, right? Or do you come down to ground to fight, and lose your only Attack bonus? Your going to have to put a limit on for how long you fly, so ground people can get you. And when you say "Air Attacks", how do you attack? YOu go up high, and divebomb, or do you swoop in with claws and teeth for a quick swipe? If you add the limit, you can add another strength, such as a dagger, or such...

Most people with wings need to rest at a point or came down like the saying says what cames up most came down like birds. he will have an up side with ground warriors but so do all flying characters. (meaning yes that would be other strength)

"Weaknesses:
- all magic
- blunt attacks
- Range attacks
- Sword attacks
- blows to the chest"
That weakness is a smart move as most human/breast/ winged characters are weak near the chest area as those are the parts that moves the wings.

Range Attacks? So I can throw a leaf at you and pwn you? Or do you mean Arrows, or Piercing (Which is the ability to PIERCE skin)? (Silky dint be a smart ass of course it means bows and tossed daggers and such thats just common sense) Or is it to the type of arrowhead, whether they are steel or iron? that really shouldn't matter as he has wings being hurt from the air is like having a knife in side on the ground. doesn't matter what the arrow is made of. even a wood arrow could take points if used right
Sword Attacks....That's REALLY not valid. There are so many types of sword, so you'll have to get specific. Plus, why are you weak to swords? Is it the form of metal, or an ingredient in the sword? If you just mean sword attacks, just say Slashing.
And is your chest weak or something, or it is just because you wanted another weakness? I don't think that is a weakness ether .. I think a better word for it would be slash

And that should rap it up.


The red is Dragness putting her 2 cent in




*P.S. Having a character thats abnormal like this means you will have more on you to make it fair to everyone else keep that in mind. *

[Dragness]

Silky .. darling .. I told you I wanted to do the reveiwing intill we got more numbers... did that slip your mind? but you seem to be doing an alright job .. I'll just put my 2 cent in if thats ok ...